need more details in proposals; can't really tell what is going on at all. consider specifics as to why you made the switch? what lead up to the switch? how did you know to switch?you can use street signs but not words art and biology; you need to create a symbol or metaphor to place on the signs.these need more work.
Out of your three I like the second one the best. It isnt so cliche, and it conveys your idea. Think of something to show how it was a good choice.
need more details in proposals; can't really tell what is going on at all.
ReplyDeleteconsider specifics as to why you made the switch? what lead up to the switch? how did you know to switch?
you can use street signs but not words art and biology; you need to create a symbol or metaphor to place on the signs.
these need more work.
Out of your three I like the second one the best. It isnt so cliche, and it conveys your idea. Think of something to show how it was a good choice.
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