Mark Making Critique

For the mark making project my critiquers like my piece and said that the bed was constructed very well, the mark was appropriate for the story and done with detail. The things I could have improved on my piece was painting the lettering and barcodes on the pvc so that it was all white, and playing with different ways to have the mark relevant to my story, also something that would need to be changed for an actual display would need to be a plain white pillowcase without frills.